Struggling with slow scenes? Learn 5 simple pacing tricks that instantly tighten your writing and keep Christian and clean fiction readers turning the page.
“Fix your pacing” is one of the most common pieces of writing advice.
But almost no one tells you how to actually do it.
Pacing isn’t about writing faster scenes or cutting words.
It’s about choosing where you enter, where you exit, and where the emotional movement happens.
Here are five simple pacing tricks that make your scenes smoother, tighter, and instantly more gripping.
1. Start Scenes Later Than You Think
Most slow pacing happens before the story even begins — in the warm-up.
Writers tend to show arrivals, settling in, or prepping the scene. But readers want the moment of disruption, not the lead-up.
❌ Slow
“She got home, took off her shoes, grabbed a snack, checked her phone—”
✔ Tight
“The voicemail was waiting. She pressed play.”
Start when something changes.
Aha: Cut the arrival. Start at the disruption.
2. End Scenes on Emotional Motion, Not Physical Exit
Readers don’t turn pages because characters walk away.
They turn pages because something shifts.
❌ Flat
“She left the room.”
✔ Gripping
“She left the room — this time without looking back.”
End with meaning, not movement.
Aha: A beat of emotion is stronger than a beat of action.
3. Add Micro-Tension Every Few Lines
You don’t need explosions, plot twists, or shouting matches.
You just need a flicker of friction.
Micro-tension looks like:
- a hesitation
- a mismatch
- a silence
- a nearly-said thing
- a contrast in emotion
Examples
💬 “She smiled. He didn’t.”
💬 “The coffee was warm. Her hands were cold.”
These tiny contrasts keep the reader alert.
Aha: Tension = contrast, not chaos.
4. Skip the Parts Nobody Cares About
Pacing dies when nothing changes — emotionally or narratively.
Readers don’t need:
- three pages of traveling
- long getting-ready scenes
- multiple paragraphs of thinking about thinking
They want movement that matters.
❌ Dragging
Three pages of preparation
✔ Efficient
“By Thursday, the plan had cracked.”
A well-placed time jump is a pacing superpower.
Aha: If nothing changes, jump ahead.
5. Break Up Long Introspection With Action Beats
Internal thoughts aren’t slow —
unbroken internal thoughts are slow.
Pair emotion with physical movement to keep the scene alive.
❌ Heavy
“She thought about the fight, looping the memory again and again.”
✔ Balanced
“She tightened the laces on her shoes. The fight replayed anyway.”
Movement grounds the emotion.
Emotion deepens the movement.
Aha: Action anchors keep introspective scenes vivid.
The Truth About Pacing
To fix pacing, you don’t need more plot.
You need more precision.
- Clean transitions
- Sharper entry points
- Quicker exits
- Micro-tension
- Moments that matter
When you start doing these?
Your story doesn’t just improve — it flies.
Why This Matters for Christian Writers
Christian storytelling is deeply emotional—not because it’s dramatic, but because it’s honest.
We write from a place where faith and humanity meet: fear and hope, doubt and trust, heartbreak and redemption.
When your characters misread a moment, it isn’t weakness…
it’s truth.
It reflects the tension we all live in:
- wanting to trust God but wrestling with insecurity
- hoping for healing but fearing disappointment
- stepping forward in faith while carrying old wounds
Letting emotion distort perception isn’t just good craft—
it’s spiritually resonant storytelling.
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